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Th e maps below show an industriaal area in the ttown of Norbinton, planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Th e maps below show an industriaal area in the ttown of Norbinton, planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given
map
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 depicts the changes that are expected to be made in a particular area of industries in the town of Norbinton.
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, it can be seen that all the places will be more residential. We can
also
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 see that the town is predicted to be more modernized and less industrial in the future.
Initially
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, the empty space located
in
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 the north side of the Farmland across
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the
the
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river will be filled by a huge house with a street in front of it that will cross the river.
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, a playground is projected to be open in the North-East part of the
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, below the river.
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, a New school will be constructed
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 the East side of the
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 where a factory used to be located.
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, Shops and a Medical centre are forecast to be developed in the South part of the
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, around the roundabout. In summary, it is possible to confirm that
this
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 place will be totally replaced by houses and amenities which will bring a more modern landscape to the town of Norbinton.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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