A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to apply for unpaid

part- time

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working

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museum

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the museum

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really interested in your hiring post, because since I

gratuated

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graduated

uni I want to

work

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in at

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service

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and I think it is one of

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thos

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those

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kind

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job

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so it can be a good experience

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me.

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, I

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this

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that

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is voluntary ,

sometime

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I go

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somewhere for volunteering because I think it is really meaningful and good memory

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I can

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. My major is aviation management so I already learned how to

work

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at a service

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. When I meet some bad customer or potential conflicts , I can treat

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situation

perfactly

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perfectly

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last

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year I had

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experiecnce

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experience

art

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gallery so I know some knowledge about folk art. I am really fit exercise so I can carry

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heavy

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or art. I can

work

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from

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to Sunday anytime because I have to go to school and do

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task

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, if you need

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my class is finish coming next Month and it is my vacation day in school so I can

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anythime

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any time

after that time. I looking forward to

get

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a good information

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from you and I

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work

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there. Thank you. Yours sincerely, HWI JU JIN.

gnlwnww

Apr 15, 2023

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

218 words

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