A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to apply for unpaid
part- time
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working
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at
museum
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the museum
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.
I
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amI
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really interested in your hiring post, because since I
gratuated
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graduated
uni I want to
work
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at
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a
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service
job
and I think it is one of
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the thos
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thos
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those
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job
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so it can be a good experience
to
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me.
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, I
really
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impress
this
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job
that
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is voluntary ,
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I go
to
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somewhere for volunteering because I think it is really meaningful and good memory
also
I can
brodens
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broadens
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horizons
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my horizons
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. My major is aviation management so I already learned how to
work
at a service
job
. When I meet some bad customer or potential conflicts , I can treat
this
situation
perfactly
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perfectly
.
Moreover
,
last
year I had
work
experiecnce
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experience
art
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gallery so I know some knowledge about folk art. I am really fit exercise so I can carry
havy
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heavy
stuffs
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stuff
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or art. I can
work
from
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Thursday
to Sunday anytime because I have to go to school and do
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task
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.
However
, if you need
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me everyday
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everyday
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my class is finish coming next Month and it is my vacation day in school so I can
work
anythime
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any time
after that time. I looking forward to
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a good information
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from you and I
hope
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work
there. Thank you. Yours sincerely, HWI JU JIN.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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