A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to apply for unpaid part- time
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part-time
working
at Replace the word
work
museum
.
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the museum
a museum
I
really interested in your hiring post, because since I Add a verb
amI
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gratuated
uni I want to Correct your spelling
graduated
work
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in at
at
service Correct your spelling
a
job
and I think it is one of Add an article
the thos
thos
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those
this
kind
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kinds
job
so it can be a good experience Change preposition
of job
to
me.
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for
Morever
, I Correct your spelling
Moreover
really
impress Add a missing verb
am really
this
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with this
job
that
is voluntary , Correct pronoun usage
which
sometime
I go Replace the word
sometimes
to
somewhere for volunteering because I think it is really meaningful and good memory Remove the preposition
apply
also
I can brodens
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broadens
broaden
horizons
.
My major is aviation management so I already learned how to Correct pronoun usage
my horizons
work
at a service job
. When I meet some bad customer or potential conflicts , I can treat this
situation perfactly
. Correct your spelling
perfectly
Moreover
, last
year I had work
experiecnce
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experience
art
gallery so I know some knowledge about folk art. I am really fit exercise so I can carry Change preposition
in art
havy
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heavy
stuffs
or art.
I can Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
work
from Thurday
to Sunday anytime because I have to go to school and do Correct your spelling
Thursday
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the task
a task
task
. Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
However
, if you need Correct pronoun usage
me everyday
everyday
my class is finish coming next Month and it is my vacation day in school so I can Replace the word
every day
work
anythime
after that time.
I looking forward to Correct your spelling
any time
get
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getting
a good information
from you and I Remove the article
good information
a piece of good information
hope
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tohope
work
there.
Thank you.
Yours sincerely,
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.