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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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This
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 is a line graph which describes the trend of amounts of wares
trafficed
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trafficked
 in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four unlike modes of transport.
According to
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 the data, it can be noticed that from the year
of
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1974 to 1982, only water and pipeline
ransportation
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transportation
 way shows
riseing
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rising
 in transportation quantity in
UK
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the UK
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.
However
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, the road and rail of goods transport form
is
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are
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 dropped
of
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 the trend. In 1974,
used
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 the pipeline traffic method of goods number reached the bottom, only it can
achieved
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 4 million tones.
On the contrary
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, the quantities of road transportation volume amounted to a high point
at
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 2002, it may
reached
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 95 million tonnes .Compared to the other three, the number of goods transported is always
lowest
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the lowest
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 in the 28 years from 1974 to 2002. Looking into the future, road transportation is expected to be most often used, because of
actual
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 situation, land carry is the most convenient.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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