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car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how to do you think this statement is? what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

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The possession of
cars
 is increasing continually in the majority of cities in the world. As
people
 have as many
cars
, ‘one big traffic jam’ is a big problem in major cities. As far as my opinion is strongly concerned, I totally agree with
this
 statement.
However
, I believe that the mentality problem of
human
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 is bigger than an environmental issue. From my perception, there are three main problems.
Firstly
,
people
 own
cars
 for showing off self beyond transportation. Like as much as you own many
cars
, you are greater or richer than other
people
.
For instance
,
people
 living in Seoul have many
cars
. On average two families of three own three
cars
.
Secondly
, it can cause a desire for consumption, as we see as many
cars
 on the road and street. Through that public can feel that they are
such
 a loser or failures without having a car. Because maybe they think, surrounding
people
 are buying a car and
that is
 like the symbol of social status.
That is
 why I
also
 have got to buy it.
Lastly
,
by
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 social media
people
 are jealous of owning a lot of automobiles and under the pressure of an inferiority complex.
According to
 a survey, especially younger
people
 are planning, to buy a car immediately after getting a first job. In my opinion, the government should control the problems directly. The government can use some financial strategies
such
 as raising the tax rate of ownership. If someone owned many automobiles, the government should raise his tax rate. In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I totally agree with the opinion because I believe, modern society needs to change positively for individuals and
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.
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