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A number of academics have shown their concern about the level of respect that students show towards their educators. However, others disagree and see that, nowadays, students are more independent and expressive when it comes to their opinion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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An alarming number of
teachers
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 have shown their concern
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 relation to the level of respect from their
students
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 towards their
educators
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.
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, other people claim that, present day’s
students
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 are
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 and show more independency in expressing their points of
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. In
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 I will argue in
defense
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 of
student’s
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the student’s
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 position. On the one hand, it is just
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basic knowledge to accept that
teachers
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 are leaders, and they need to lead by example. It is proven that
students
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 mimic their teacher’s
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 in classes,
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, if
teachers
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 show respect,
then
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students
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 have no other
choices
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 but to respond in the same way.
In addition
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,
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an educator’s
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educator’s
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educators’
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 classroom management is the main key to
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 major
misunderstanding
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misunderstandings
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 that might occur in classrooms, and the latter is down to
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teachers
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teachers'
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 teaching skills.
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, how to deal with less intelligent
students
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, or error
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, which in some cases can be embarrassing for a student if it was not dealt with sensibly.
Thus
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,
educator’s
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educators’
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 academic proficiency and management skills may be some of the reasons for the
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 that some of the current
educators
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 hold against
learners
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.
On the other hand
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,
present
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 method of education places
learners
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 in the
center
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 of learning,
in other
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 it is student
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 approach.
This
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 method allows
learners
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 to be more creative and expressive, which some academics, especially those from the old schools of education, might see
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as inappropriate and in most cases disrespectful towards them.
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, nowadays,
students
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 are encouraged to think independently and present their
argument
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arguments
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 freely, of
course
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this
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 needs to be within the boundary of neutral respect, whether their point of
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 is
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or
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 against their
educators
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. Needless to point out the positive impact that
this
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 approach has on
students
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;
however
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,
educators
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 need not
to
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see the
dark-side
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dark side
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 of
this
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 modern
view
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.
To conclude
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, in my opinion, the era of
teacher’s
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 total manipulation in classrooms has ended, in
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 it is time to praise our
learners
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 for their courage and ability to be independent thinkers rather than
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followers.

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