A number of academics have shown their concern about the level of respect that students show towards their educators. However, others disagree and see that, nowadays, students are more independent and expressive when it comes to their opinion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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An alarming number of
teachers
have shown their concern
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relation to the level of respect from their
students
towards their
educators
.
While
, other people claim that, present day’s
students
are
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and show more independency in expressing their points of
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I will argue in
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of
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position. On the one hand, it is just
a
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basic knowledge to accept that
teachers
are leaders, and they need to lead by example. It is proven that
students
mimic their teacher’s
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in classes,
for example
, if
teachers
show respect,
then
students
have no other
choices
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but to respond in the same way.
In addition
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an educator’s
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educator’s
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classroom management is the main key to
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major
misunderstanding
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misunderstandings
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that might occur in classrooms, and the latter is down to
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teachers'
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teaching skills.
For instance
, how to deal with less intelligent
students
, or error
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correction
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, which in some cases can be embarrassing for a student if it was not dealt with sensibly.
Thus
,
educator’s
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academic proficiency and management skills may be some of the reasons for the
view
that some of the current
educators
hold against
learners
.
On the other hand
,
present
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method of education places
learners
in the
center
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of learning,
in other
words
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it is student
center
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approach.
This
method allows
learners
to be more creative and expressive, which some academics, especially those from the old schools of education, might see
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as inappropriate and in most cases disrespectful towards them.
For example
, nowadays,
students
are encouraged to think independently and present their
argument
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freely, of
course
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this
needs to be within the boundary of neutral respect, whether their point of
view
is
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or
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against their
educators
. Needless to point out the positive impact that
this
approach has on
students
;
however
,
educators
need not
to
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see the
dark-side
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of
this
modern
view
.
To conclude
, in my opinion, the era of
teacher’s
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total manipulation in classrooms has ended, in
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it is time to praise our
learners
for their courage and ability to be independent thinkers rather than
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followers.
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