The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in Uk from 2001 to 2008

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in Uk from 2001 to 2008
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The figure illustrates the proportion of
men
,women and
children
who consumed greens per day in the UK in the 8-year period between 2001 to 2008. It is interesting to notice that in the 8-year period of time, the people who were in the category of
men
and
children
were nowhere near the women,which was the highest
percentage
of consuming fruits and vegetables. Meanwhile, the proportion of
children
was the lowest in consuming greens. The
percentage
of women who ate fruits and vegetables started at the point of almost 20% in 2001.Despite growing steadily to reaching a peak of over 40% in 2006,the
percentage
then
went down slowly.Regarding the proportion of
men
and
children
, the figures started it point at 12% for
children
and 18% for
men
in 2001,after having a similar trend of steady growth,it climbed gradually to almost 30% for
men
and 27% for
children
in 2007,the
percentage
then
had the small dip in 2008.
To conclude
it can be seen that all the figures were increasing until 2007,despite that there was a small dip in every figure in 2008.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, children, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dip" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant fluctuation
  • Dietary habits
  • Public health campaign
  • Demographic breakdown
  • Socio-economic status
  • Predictive suggestions
  • Consumption rates
  • Dietary guidelines
  • Technological advancements
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