The table below shows the results of survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the activities, facilities and opening hours.
The table compares and contrasts the rating given by the people to a city sports
club
based on three different categories such
as ,
activities , facilities and opening hours.
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Overall
, out of three , two amenities got a good satisfaction ratio from both
genders. Whereas
, satisfaction for a range of activities in club
varied on both
sexes.
To begin
with, 75% of female members rated the activities in the club
as very satisfying and average . Meanwhile, 3% reported it was not satisfied . While
, for ,males 55% of them give it excellent . Whereas
, 40% rated it average , and 5% thought it very bad . By contrast
, club
facilities accounted highly satisfying ratio ,and was 64% and 63% respectively. While
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both
men and women recorded it as satisfying . But , 24% of both
sex reported it was bad . Moreover
, the opening hours of clubs were excellent for 72% of women and 25% for them , it was good . However
, 3% only rated it as not good. By contrast
, for the opposite gender , it was 44% for very satisfying , 19% for satisfying and 37% for very bad.Submitted by varshajose345 on
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