The table below shows the results of survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the activities, facilities and opening hours.

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The table compares and contrasts the rating given by the people to a city sports

club

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based on three different categories

such

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activities , facilities and opening hours.

Overall

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, out of three , two amenities got a good satisfaction ratio from

both

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genders.

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, satisfaction for a range of activities in

club

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varied on

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sexes.

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with, 75% of female members rated the activities in the

club

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as very satisfying and average . Meanwhile, 3% reported it was not satisfied .

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, for ,males 55% of them give it excellent .

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, 40% rated it average , and 5% thought it very bad .

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club

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facilities accounted highly satisfying ratio ,and was 64% and 63% respectively.

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22% and 27% of

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men and women recorded it as satisfying . But , 24% of

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sex reported it was bad .

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, the opening hours of clubs were excellent for 72% of women and 25% for them , it was good .

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, 3% only rated it as not good.

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, for the opposite gender , it was 44% for very satisfying , 19% for satisfying and 37% for very bad.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "by contrast, whereas, while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words club, both with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

200 words

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