Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are different kinds of habits comparing people’s working
life
. Some of them spend all their
life
in one organization, and some of them change their job in a certain period of
time
. Any of these habits have benefits and disadvantages as well. Working for the same company gives safety, a continuous, predictable salary, and the possibility to reach a higher position in the company’s structure. On the other side,
this
type of worker will live their whole
life
in one place, without the possibility of moving to another
city
, or another country.
This
could be a calm, relaxing, and safe style of living, possibly in their own house with a garden.
For example
, my sister belongs to group one. She has been working as a dentist for more than 15 years in the same place in a small
city
. She is satisfied with her job
,
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and does not need any step forward to step to a bigger
city
. She has a house, family, kids and pets, and predictable, safe growth. Some people are on the opposite side. They need something exciting happening, and after a few
years
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they might like to
move
to another
city
or country. They need various emotional impacts from
time
to
time
. It does not really matter if they have to start
life
over and over again in a new
city
, in a new company. They love to
move
, love to know new people, and are brave enough to quit at any
time
their
work
. It is not a big deal for them to participate in job interviews. On
this
side are standing me. I am
also
a dentist and stopped working 10 years ago in another small village in the eastern part of Hungary and have moved to the capital. I started to
work
in the beginning in National Sports Hospital,
then
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, when I got the chance to
move
forward, I changed. Now I am working in a private office in the heart of Budapest. I do not have a house, kids, or pets, but have the possibility and the chance to
move
quickly as I got a new chance. In my dreams, my next destination to
move
in is the UK. In ,conclusion both sides have advantages and disadvantages. Those, who
work
for the same company all their
life
, have a calm, and relaxing lifestyle, with less travel. And those, who have chosen the way to
work
for different organisation
time
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to
time
, have the opportunity to change all their
life
in a certain
time
period.
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