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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. เริ่ม 12:40

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Many individuals believe that the key to
make
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 streets less dangerous
place
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places
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 is by pushing drivers to move slower.
However
, some
people
 think that there are better options to achieve it. From my point of view, giving
people
the
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 limit
of
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 how fast they can drive is not the best idea to make
people
 feel safe. First of all, reducing the maximum speed
which
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 you can go
with
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on a road is understandable. It would make
people
to
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be more careful
while
 driving, which would result in
less
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 car accidents.
Moreover
, there is a possibility of them feeling calmer because of that.
Nevertheless
, there are better ways to make the street a safe place for everyone.
For instance
, by giving humanity more serious punishments if they decide to break the law by speeding
to
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 fast. It would make society terrified of losing
driver’s
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 license which would push them to obey the rules. To achieve
such
 a result, I believe, manipulation is a key to success. Reducing the speed is not a successful way of dealing with issues as it makes
people
 more frustrated and does not make them
to
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listen.
On the other hand
, showing what consequences
such
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 may result in, scaring
people
 at the same time by punishing them,
may be
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maybe
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 a successful way to improve road safety. In conclusion, some
people
 prefer to think that making a street
safer
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 place may be achieved
with
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 making
people
to
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drive slower.
While
other
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others
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 believe there are better ways of dealing with that. I think
,
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 the consequences given
them
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 when they do not obey the rules are the best way to make the road safe, no matter how cruel it may be.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • road safety
  • maximum speed
  • speed limits
  • reaction time
  • stopping distance
  • fatality
  • driving habits
  • traffic education
  • road infrastructure
  • vehicle safety
  • enforcement
  • traffic laws
  • technology integration
  • traffic management
  • high-risk areas
  • strategic planning
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