Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Development of technology reached a very high level in the past 30 years.

This

is very helpful to stop the rising crime statistics

due to

the increasing population all around the Earth. Almost everyone has at least one mobile

phone

in the bag, which is capable of either taking a picture with its camera in very high resolution or recording voices around. The chance to monitor us is now ready for the investigation agencies. After 9/11 the terror attacks increased around the world, so the main advantage of the possibility to track our life through our mobile

phone

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is protecting our society against terrorism.

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security cameras can record 7/24 on the streets, especially in those areas, where criminal cases are at a high level. Observing us has disadvantages as well, as our private life is involved. It is so simple to get accidentally malware software on a cell

phone

, which has the ability to track us. Governments can send easily programs like Pegasus, which is spyware, to an individual’s mobile

phone

, to track every communication he does. They can read his e-mails, to

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conversations he made, and can watch everything around him through the lenses of the camera. We can clearly see, that giving up a little part of our privacy will affect positively our safety,

due to

the chance, that the investigation agencies can easily identify a criminal

for example

by tracking his

phone

. Even if we do not like to share our private life with anybody, the advantages outweigh the few disadvantages in my opinion. The higher the technological development, the less the risk of a new 9/11 is.