One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution.Do you agree or disagree?

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lack of
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and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution around the world. From my perspective, I agree with
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is that
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population's number is increasing,
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redoubles the need for nourishment.
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,the lack of
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creates a number of difficulties for the world's inhabitants.
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,in the countries of the African continent:Algeria,Sudan,Egypt,Libya,
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the salinity of the water, the dry climate and the location in the
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geographical region complicate the life of the residents.Avoid getting into
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a situation, for which we turn to shortage
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and gm crops.
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,we must not forget to think about the health of the citizen and young
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,there is a high probability of contracting various diseases among
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due to
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hunger.
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,malaria,
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in order not to get sick,they should have strong immunity and always eat well,
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but
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to adults.
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considering the aforementioned points, in my
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gm ingredients and fast
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are the only way for us to have strong immunity and get rid of famine.

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