Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourism do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?
Nowadays
tourism
became
one of the most prominent parts of every person’s life. Today Wrong verb form
has become
people
take it as a habit or something usual. However
, tourism
can bring some problems to the countries which were visited by the people
. In that essay I am going to talk about which problems can tourism
bring and the ways of avoiding them.
One of the main issues that could be brought by the tourists
is the increase in the cost of some ordinary goods. This
is because shops and supermarkets try to make things more expensive for tourists
, but they do not think about the people
who live in this
country
. Another essential drawback of people
who travel to foreign countries is that they might pollute the country
which they are visiting. That is
the reason for the recklessness from the side of the travellers and because they do not care about the pollution in other countries.
Having said that, there are also
several benefits of tourism
. The most important one is about the economics of the visited country
. Because if people
are going to travel abroad, they are going to spend a great deal of money there which is really good for the country
and its economy. Moreover
, if a lot of tourists
visit the country
and they will
like it, they are going to suggest to their friends to go to some place which will increase the population of the Verb problem
apply
country
.
To conclude
I would like to say that I agree that tourism
can cause some problems, but it is also
really beneficial for the country
which is visited by a great number of tourists
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