some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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women
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ideal
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manager
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women
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females
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exeillent
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skills in leadership matter .The main reason given to support the claim is that ladies have special
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personalities
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US University represents that
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89 per cent of tiny and small mistakes in some huge projects
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men
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on the details . consequences the ladies have plentiful
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no
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enought
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such
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companies
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sginificant
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war events .
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of leadership. I
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management
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experience
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acquire
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depending
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personality
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personalty
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personality
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and the background of
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individual
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individual
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a leader
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leader
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not on the human
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gender
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