School teachers used to be sources of information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

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Educational tutors have been known for ages for sharing their knowledge with others.
Nevertheless
, there are individuals like me who
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that teachers are not as useful and significant as they used to be in the past.
This
is because of the new ways of learning things,
such
as using the
internet
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or reading books.
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this
suggestion.
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is an important part of people's lives. It has much more information in it than any human being is capable to imagine.
Furthermore
, if we wish to learn something new, we can do it on our own just by opening the
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internet
which knows much more than a teacher in general. Which is why we usually check the information in that place.
For example
news. It is much faster to do so than to ask some tutor about it who may have no idea about
such
things. Another essential resource of
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knowledge
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books. They are considered as a
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reliable
source of
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information
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. People are intelligent creatures and they do not have to ask about something others all the time when they can figure it out on their own just by reading.
For
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if we wish to learn new
spanish
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vocabulary, all we need is a
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dictionary
.
That is
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enough to get to know what we wanted. That way we may
also
be proud of ourselves for achieving
such
knowledge without anyone
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else's
else
help.
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self-esteem is growing up. In conclusion, school teachers still take a
significent
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significant
part in today's century.
However
, I believe that they are not as needed as they used to be, because of the different and better practical ways of educating ourselves.
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