Today more a more tourists are visiting place where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic. What are benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

There is no doubt that travelling is one of the best ways of exploring the vast
worlf
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world
we live in. Over the years it has been observed that there has been an increase in the number of
people
visiting the most difficult terrains
such
as the Sahara
dersert
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desert
or the
Antartic
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Antarctic
region.
This
essay will explain the benefits and drawbacks of living and exploring these
extremeties
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extremities
of mother earth. The primary reason why many folks do not visit these areas
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is the un-nerving living
conditions
there. The explorers require a lot of preparation and training to survive in those situations.
For example
, it is
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extremely
difficult to
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in
Antractica
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Antarctica
which is at a very high altitude, and
hence
people
with existing medical
conditions
are not allowed to visit these places.
Further
, expeditions to
such
exotic locations are very expensive. The total cost of
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and travel could burn years of savings in just
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days.
Therefore
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is another biggest disadvantage that we see.
On the other hand
, despite all the hard
conditions
,
people
still put a lot of effort to go to these countries for one simple thing, experience. They get to witness some of the
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natural
phenomenon
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such
as dancing northern lights or green
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in the middle of
desert
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the desert
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, which we would not see anywhere else on the earth.
Such
experiences make them appreciate the beauty of
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nature and they are pushed to see more and more of it.
Along with
these events, they
also
get an opportunity to see the most exotic animal species in their natural habitat. For
exmaple
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example
, polar bear hunting on
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, or a desert snake following its prey. All the hardships and
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for
such
sights are justified. In conclusion,
while
there are
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demerits of
traveling
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to unpopular locations
such
as surviving in extreme
conditions
and huge expenditure, it is all worth
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the lifetime of experience that
people
get when they enjoy
the
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raw mother nature.
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