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You have seen an advertisement for the post of Quality Assurance Manager at a factory. You want to apply for this job. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter: - talk about your educational background - describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job - explain why you want to work for that company.

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Hello
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 Sir Or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager at your factory.
This
 is Milav Soni and I am from Gandhinagar.
Firstly
, I would like to give you my educational experience. I completed my Master's Degree in the Electronics field in the year 2016. I passed it with a grade
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A
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'.
Secondly
, I would like to inform you about my
work
 experience and skills. I have been working as a Quality Assurance Engineer in my current
company
 for the
last
 7 years. I have just promoted to senior Quality Assurance Engineer
last
 year. The reason why I would be suitable for
this
 post is that I am aware
about
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testing
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the testing
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 procedures
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 Electronics boards.
Additionally
, I was a leader of my
last
 production project in which I made a plan for testing and a document for project management.
Moreover
, I have experience with Manual and Automatic tester machine procedures.
Thirdly
, I want to
work
 in your
company
 because I want to
work
 in an MNC
company
 like yours and I like to
work
 in
such
 a
company
 where it has its own products. I came across your some products that interested to me. I would be happy to have an opportunity to
work
 with your
company
. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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