The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of money spent on
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, the payments of these countries spent the least on health care and transport.
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the greatest proportion of expenditure (34%) was on housing, Add a comma
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housing accounted for just 21% of the total. Followed by in Use synonyms
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the greatest single expense was other goods and services at 29%, compared with 26% in Use synonyms
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In both countries, the smallest proportion of spending was on health care. In Correct your spelling
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accounted for 3% of the total household expenses, Linking Words
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the figure for transport represented 10%. These figures were exactly doubled in Linking Words
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which were 6% and 20% respectively.
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