The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009
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The table illustrates the percentage of students'
attendance
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in four types of secondary
schools
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between 2000 and 2009.
It is clear that
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the
attendance
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rate of students in voluntary
schools
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, grammar
schools
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and specialist
schools
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declined throughout the period.
While
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community
schools
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had the highest rate of
attendance
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. Looking into more detail, in 2000, voluntary
schools
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reached an
attendance
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rate of 52%, which was the highest compared to other
schools
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in that period. By 2009 the number of pupils reached its lowest at 20%.
However
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, in that same period, Community School
attendance
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jumped from 12% in 2000 to 30% in 2005, reaching 58% by 2009 In 2000, the Grammar
Schools
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' presence record placed the second highest at 24%s but suffered a significant decline reaching 12% in 2009. Meanwhile, specialist
schools
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faced a steady decrease percentage of 1% each year
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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