The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict the development of a coastal
village
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named Seaville over the period of 30 years starting in 1980. It is obvious that the
village
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underwent a wide range of changes.
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, the expansion of the
village
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was accompanied by the introduction of new amenities
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as a restaurant, club, and golf course. During the period between 1980 and 2010, there were significant changes in both the west and the east of the Seaville
village
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. On the one hand, there were only some holiday
cottages
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and a hotel located in the west of the
village
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in 1980. A marsh emerged beside the
cottages
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and there was a woodland in the northwest. 30 years after, the woodland was chopped down to make way for a golf course.
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, permanent houses substituted for the holiday
cottages
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and the marsh,
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all the
cottages
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were relocated to the east bank of Seaville.
On the other hand
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, in the east of the
village
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, there used to be just a tea room and the sand dunes along the coast in 1980. Over a 30-year period, a boat club had been erected by the river and there was an appearance of a new main road so as to access the east bank.
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, retirement villages had been constructed by the main road and the tea room was replaced by a restaurant.
Beside
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that
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a high-rise hotel was
also
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built
while
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the
village
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still preserved the original hotel in the western part.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village, cottages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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