some people say that professional workers such as doctors, nurse, and teachers, who make greater contribution to the society should be paid more than those people in the field of sports and entertainment. to what extent do you agree or disagree

To begin

with, at present some

people

say that professionals like doctors and teachers should be paid more as their contribution is higher than that of

people

in the fields like sports and entertainment. But, I do not agree with the above statement as it is cannot be compared. First and foremost, there is no

such

way to measure the value one gives to

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society based on his or her job. Our society is diverse with multiple careers and there's no

such

requirement for everyone to stick to a certain profession.

Furthermore

,

people

choose their paths based on their interests and skills. So , sportsmen, musicians and dancers are

also

very much needed for the well-being of society.

For instance

, by forcing a person to become a teacher or a nurse is not effective if that person loves making sculptures. You can get the best out of a person when he enjoys the job.

Additionally

, sports and entertainment are

also

essential to maintain the mental health of the community. There is evidence that

people

enjoyed and admired art and crafts even in the prehistoric era indicating their value to human beings. Even today

also

we love watching shows and games in order to be relaxed from our busy schedules.

Moreover

, nowadays school students are encouraged to participate in sports and to learn to play at least a single instrument.

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occupational contribution is subjective and it varies from one to another.

According to

my point of view, I believe that all careers are equally required and important to the betterment of the community and should be paid without any discrimination.