Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
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and it is not settling.
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self-employed because it brings more creativity. They know what they want to do and how to achieve it by Change the article
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produce
many brilliant ideas. Change the verb form
producing
For example
, in a particular area, Linking Words
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people tend to have Correct article usage
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a
breakfast before going to work. Remove the article
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This
condition makes the Linking Words
entrepreneur
become creative, which leads them to run a business Use synonyms
such
as selling a breakfast menu. Linking Words
Moreover
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no
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not
further
to the company.
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On the other hand
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entrepreneur
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such
a strong mind. Correct quantifier usage
apply
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strong mind requires them to face anything kind of Correct article usage
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conditions
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condition
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, a self-employed must be ready when there is a government regulation that can affect their business and maybe leads to Linking Words
a
bankruptcy. Remove the article
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Additionally
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an
businessman is not a Change the article
a
settle
position. They do not have a regular income like the employees. Replace the word
settled
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their fixed earned each month, Change the verb form
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while
the self-employed, Linking Words
such
as a trader, have income if they can make a profit from their stocks.
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To sum up
, there are many reasons why some groups tend to be an Linking Words
entrepreneur
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such
as Linking Words
brings
more creativity and a free soul. Wrong verb form
bringing
In contrast
, being a solopreneur carries drawbacks, which are Linking Words
need
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the need
a
strong mind and it is not a Change preposition
for a
settle
position.Replace the word
settled
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...