Education for young people is important in many countries. However, some people think that governments should spend more money on education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is often argued that government need to invest more
money
to improve the literacy of
adults
. I mostly agree with
this
viewpoint because all humans have a right to learn without any discrimination. In
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essay, I will explain my opinion about adult learners. On the one hand, it is understandable why people want to spend more
money
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young students. First of all, young students will be the root of
this
society. They need to support our country in the future.
For example
, all
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of
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money
cann
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the future. Those youth will grow up and support our country soon.
Moreover
, the young can run fast. It means that they can make the result easily compare to the elder.
On the other hand
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government
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by the economy. Congress
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should
could
decide more expense of it.
To begin
with, it is the basic right to be educated.
However
, many
adults
could not get many chances to learn when they need because of
lack
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of
education
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an education
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system for
adults
.
Furthermore
,
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of citizens is very important to keep
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social networks.
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An adult
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Adult
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who
are
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not able to
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read
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and
writing
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can be isolated from society. It could cause
anther
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problem and we need to pay to fix it. In
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conclusion
,
although
nessecery of spending lots of
money
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the youth, I believe that we have to invest more
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the
adults
who want to learn how to read and write. It can make everyone protect their own right.
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