You recently borrowed something from a friend. Unfortunately, the item has become damaged. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter remind your friend that you borrowed something from him/her explain how the item became damaged suggest how you can resolve the issue of the damaged item

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Dear
my
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friend H Hello. How are you? I am writing
this
letter to say sorry
what
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for what
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you lend me
lase
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last
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week. Do you
remeber
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remember
that I borrowed your pen
last
Friday? At that time I could not give it back to you because I left school
earier
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earlier
. I thought I would return it on
monday
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.
However
, My young
sisther
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sister
who is 5 years old came to my room
play
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with it and have broken
in
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Saturday morning. I
appolosize
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apologise
this
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for this
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and want to buy
same
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the same
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with
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as
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yours. Today afternoon, I and my sister went to the store and found the exact same one. I am so sorry again and hope you accept my mind. See you on Monday
in
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school. Have a nice day. With love Hera
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