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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about the annual
production
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 of
milk
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 in four different countries over a three-year period contemplating 1990, 2000, and 2010.
According to
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 the table, the Netherlands is the most important producer of
milk
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, generating from 11.262.000
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liters
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 of
milk
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 in 1990 to 11.466.000
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liters
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 in 2010.
On the other hand
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, Guatemala produces the fewest amount of
this
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 good, from 26.000
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liters
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 in 1990 to 84.000
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liters
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 in 2010.
While
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 there is a steady pattern that increases in the Netherlands'
production
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 of
milk
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, in Australia we appreciate a turnback decreasing pattern, producing 11.246.000
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liters
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 of
milk
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 in 1990 to 9.165.000 in 2010.
On the other hand
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, Tanzania and Guatemala continue rising their
milk
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 annual
production
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. To summarise, we may infer that the annual
milk
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production
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 will continue increasing in the Netherlands, Tanzania, and Guatemala.
However
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, in Australia, we predict a decrease in
milk
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production
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 where it seems to experience a fall.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, milk, liters with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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