In a number of countries some people think It is necessary to spend large sums of Money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Train
is one of the best inventions by Add an article
The train
human
which has a major role in these days busy life especially for city commuters so these Fix the agreement mistake
humans
people
think that Use synonyms
government
out to set up a large array of money to introduce modern rail way lines for Correct article usage
the government
traveling
fast Change the spelling
travelling
while
other city dwellers are opposed to Linking Words
this
idea and think the money should be spent on progressing existing transportable ways.
Having faster Linking Words
trains
Use synonyms
among
Change preposition
in
cities
is Use synonyms
desireable
Correct your spelling
desirable
by
the majority of folks who are living out in the suburb because they have to commute Change preposition
for
everyday
which can be challenging as most part of their time is Correct your spelling
every day
spending
on Wrong verb form
spent
trains
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
this
tiring commute can lay the foundation for delaying to occupy or meetings ;the situation getting annoyed your head Linking Words
who
breathes down your neck all time. Correct word choice
and
Furthermore
, It is not only workers who are eager to faster train lines ; tourists have the same idea considering the convenience Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
this
type of transit offers Linking Words
in contrast
to buses and if these Linking Words
trains
became faster, Use synonyms
holiday_maker
could visit more outstanding Correct your spelling
holidaymakers
nature
beauties in a short period of time.
Replace the word
natural
On the other hand
, a growing number of Linking Words
people
feel that wealth is better to consume on advancing living public transport. They claim that Use synonyms
the
high amount of citizens Correct article usage
a
are
settled in Change the verb form
is
cities
. Take Use synonyms
metropolis
city as an example. Correct article usage
a metropolis
Commuty
Correct your spelling
Community
utilize
each kind of transportation Change the verb form
utilizes
methods
rather than suburban Fix the agreement mistake
method
trains
. It means buses, Use synonyms
metros
are choc_a_bloc with Correct word choice
and metros
people
who are in a hurry always. Not only that, there is a common belief that most metropolis Use synonyms
cities
especially in Use synonyms
under developed
countries lack basic infrastructures and needing a good Integrated transport system is getting indispensable Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
undoubteldy
. A good example of Correct your spelling
undoubtedly
this
would be traffic congestion which is the Linking Words
consequences
of Fix the agreement mistake
consequence
this
weakness which Linking Words
leals
Correct your spelling
leads
people
to drive their own cars Use synonyms
instead
of taking on economical public Vehicles and gives the rise to harmful emissions in the air.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that Linking Words
cities
are Use synonyms
grown
in Wrong verb form
growing
Correct article usage
the countrysides
countrysides
because of Fix the agreement mistake
countryside
population
explosion, Correct article usage
the population
needs
for quick Correct article usage
the needs
arriving
is Replace the word
arrival
increased
Wrong verb form
increasing
as well as
demanding for redeveloping transit of Linking Words
mega
Correct your spelling
megacities
cities
; I deem both views are correct in some ways but the authority should invest in enhancing Current public transport Use synonyms
initially
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