These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?
There is growing sentiment today related to living abroad.
People
tend to have jobs overseas and take their families to leave their hometowns with them. From my point of view, I believe that Use synonyms
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trend brings more pros than cons and I will discuss it in Linking Words
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To begin
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children
who go with their parents to live abroad can learn and speak multiple languages. The reason why they can speak more than 2 languages is that they will talk with their parent in their mother Use synonyms
language
and learn or study in school in their host country's Use synonyms
language
. Living in an environment where everyone speaks their mother Use synonyms
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For example
, many families from Asian Linking Words
countries
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as Vietnam, China, Korea, etc,move to some Linking Words
countries
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as America, England, Canada, Australia, etc. From that, Linking Words
children
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people
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prefer to move to developed nations for better education for their Use synonyms
children
and a higher standard of living for their whole family. First of all, Developed Use synonyms
countries
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comprehensively. Use synonyms
For example
, Finland is the leader in education in the world, their educational system focuses on helping Linking Words
children
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people
who live in developed Use synonyms
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can enjoy a better life with high medical service, advanced technology, good citizenship, etc. A counter-example in Finland the happiest country in the world, Use synonyms
children
born here will receive subsidies from the government, it can be toys, books or money for parents to buy food or necessary stuff for their Use synonyms
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In conclusion, I think that living abroad trend brings more benefits than drawbacks, as long as we Use synonyms
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