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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

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There is growing sentiment today related to living abroad.
People
 tend to have jobs overseas and take their families to leave their hometowns with them. From my point of view, I believe that
this
 trend brings more pros than cons and I will discuss it in
this
 essay.
To begin
 with,
children
 who go with their parents to live abroad can learn and speak multiple languages. The reason why they can speak more than 2 languages is that they will talk with their parent in their mother
language
 and learn or study in school in their host country's
language
. Living in an environment where everyone speaks their mother
language
 will help
children
to
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learn a new
language
easier
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.
For example
, many families from Asian
countries
such
 as Vietnam, China, Korea, etc,move to some
countries
, in which English is the main
language
such
 as America, England, Canada, Australia, etc. From that,
children
 who live in that environment
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can speak fluently at least 2 languages. To continue,
people
 from developing
countries
 prefer to move to developed nations for better education for their
children
 and a higher standard of living for their whole family. First of all, Developed
countries
 often have a developed education, in which innovative thinking combined with good learning conditions helps develop
people
 comprehensively.
For example
, Finland is the leader in education in the world, their educational system focuses on helping
children
 to their potential and teaching them soft skills and core knowledge at the same time.
Secondly
,
people
 who live in developed
countries
 can enjoy a better life with high medical service, advanced technology, good citizenship, etc. A counter-example in Finland the happiest country in the world,
children
 born here will receive subsidies from the government, it can be toys, books or money for parents to buy food or necessary stuff for their
children
. In conclusion, I think that living abroad trend brings more benefits than drawbacks, as long as we
would
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learn to adjust and adapt to the new culture and environment.
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