Some parents think children should have mobile phones, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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Secondly
, it helps to enhance their knowledge about their country as well as
other countries. As they can get international or national news on phone
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Finally
, the pupils can complete their academic tasks with enjoyment. Furthermore
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However
, it will distract their study because when they get any notification from their cell phone
then
they will focus on the notification rather than their study. Finally
, they will get addicted to social crime and games which are not good for their future career. For instance
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