Some parents think children should have mobile phones, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Parents have different views about whether

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developing their life. There are a number of reasons why I think

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phone

is a useful device for children. First of all, it is a

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thing because

students

can get any type of information from it within a second.

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, if

students

want to know their school and college

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, they do not need to go

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school or the college for seeing the

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they will search

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on

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within two

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and know their

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easily.

Secondly

, it helps to enhance their knowledge about their country

as well as

other countries. As they can get international or national news on

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,

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know the

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economy, capital, language, politics and so on.

Finally

, the pupils can complete their academic tasks with enjoyment.

Furthermore

, they can use digital books and can know any topic more deeply with HD video which

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increased their excitement and

also

their attention

on

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study.

For instance

, A biology student can know biological terms and can see the organs

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pictures and videos on

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phone

and know the

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information in

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. Despite the above arguments, it has some disadvantages too. Most

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parents do not appreciate

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cell

phone

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To begin

with, they think that if

students

use

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, it will harm their eyes , neck and mental development.

For example

,

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Star newspaper published that 60%

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are facing

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eye

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because of

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However

, it will distract their study because when they get any notification from their cell

phone

then

they will focus on the notification rather than their study.

Finally

, they will get addicted to social crime and games which are not good for their future career.

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, In

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70%

children

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to temple run

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and can not do a brilliant

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which is why 50%

students

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fail

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ssc examination. In conclusion,

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has a plethora of negative

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but I think it will help to achieve

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breathtaking success in

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children's life

then

can outweigh

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sides

of

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