People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries. This means that it is not that important to travel to those countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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, I completely disagree with Linking Words
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an idea because it is hard to interact with new places and societies remotelyLinking Words
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and because online browsing can be seen more as a part of an upcoming Remove the comma
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travel
.
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journey
trip
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, it is still near to impossible to interact with physical Linking Words
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locals
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while
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. Maybe, the Add an article
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advancement of virtual reality and humanoid robots will make it more realistic, but, for now, there are no ways for touching items on video streaming services. Linking Words
For example
, some vloggers ask subscribers to lead them through a video, but, despite Linking Words
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such
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a viewer cannot feel smells or wind in the same way as people in that location.
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another country, but it will not give experience from the first person view. Usually, consuming more information develops Remove the article
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a higher
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for new discoveries in person. It helps to build a plan of budgeting and places to visit. Correct your spelling
appetite
For example
, it is almost a rule for experienced travellers to read tripadvisor.com and watch the most popular reviews on youtube.com before going to a location.
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To conclude
, the internet cannot replace physical presence for learning Linking Words
other
countries because the level of possible interactions is completely different and Change preposition
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information about a new culture on websites stimulates an actual journey. Technologies are not developed that much to outplace Correct your spelling
acquiring
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regular tourism.Correct article usage
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