The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009
The pie chart provides data on how
Germany
and France
produce
Wrong verb form
produced
electricity
from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.
as an initial overview, Germany
was heavily dependent on conventional thermal in generating electricity
. Almost all of the electricity
in France
was generated by nuclear power. both Germany
and France
generate a small amount of electricity
from renewables.
Looking into my details, almost 60% of electricity
in Germany
is produced by conventional thermal,Only 23% is by nuclear, leaving 17% to be generated by renewable energy Which was further
divided into 39% generated by Biomass and approximately 37% by the wind.
France
on the other hand
, generates almost 76% of its electricity
by nuclear and only 10% by conventional thermal Which is the opposite trend of Germany
. renewable energy produced around 14% of France
's electricity
80% of that is
done by hydroelectricity. Wint and Biomass generate 10% and 8.1% of France
's electricity
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