The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the stages and

equipment used in the cement making process,

and how cement is used to produce concrete for

building purposes.

Summarise the information by selecting and

reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the steps of how
cement
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is made
along with
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things which have to be obtained to put the concrete-making process to an end.
Overall
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, making
cement
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seems to be more complicated with its instruction than trying to get concrete with only a few crucial products.
Firstly
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, to make
a
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cement
a block of cement
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cement
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you have to crush the limestone and clay it together and
then
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mix it.
Next,
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the substance will go through a rotating heater which will make it warm and ready for grinding.
That is
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how the
cement
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becomes ready to be packed into bags.
On the other hand
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, concrete production demands putting only four things together in a concrete mixer, which is
essential
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an essential
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machine in
this
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process. In the end, the products which must be mixed together are 15% of
cement
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, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel and with
them
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,them
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the substance is completed.
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