The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#diagrams #show #stages #equipment #cement #process #purposes #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The diagrams illustrate the steps of how
cement
is made along with
things which have to be obtained to put the concrete-making process to an end. Overall
, making cement
seems to be more complicated with its instruction than trying to get concrete with only a few crucial products.
Firstly
, to make a
Remove the article
cement
a block of cement
cement
you have to crush the limestone and clay it together and then
mix it. Next,
the substance will go through a rotating heater which will make it warm and ready for grinding. That is
how the cement
becomes ready to be packed into bags.
On the other hand
, concrete production demands putting only four things together in a concrete mixer, which is essential
machine in Add an article
an essential
this
process. In the end, the products which must be mixed together are 15% of cement
, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel and with them
the substance is completed.Add a comma
,them
Submitted by alekssandrahoffa on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
▼
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼
