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the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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the table illustrates, the
number
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 of
speakers
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 of six
Language
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,
Mandarin
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Chinese
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,
Hindi
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,
Spanish
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, English, Arabic, and Portugues,
therefore
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, divided Into three types, First one is the
Number
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 of native
speakers
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 and the second one is the
Number
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 of
speakers
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 as an additional
language
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overall
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, as we see the highest
number
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 of
speakers
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 and native
speakers
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 is
Mandarin
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Chinese
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,
while
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 The least one is Portuguese in the three types,
whereas
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, the other
language
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 remains constant. the biggest amount of native
speakers
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 is
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mandarin
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Mandarin
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Chinese
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,
also
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 as an additional
language
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,
moreover
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, the total
number
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 for both
speakers
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 is 1,090,
in addition
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,
Hindi
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 and
Spanish
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language
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, has the same
number
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 of native
speakers
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,
in contrast
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,
speakers
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 as an additional
language
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,
Hindi
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 is biggest than
Spanish
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, but in the total
number
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 of
Hindi
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 is 490 million
while
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 for
Spanish
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 is 420 million,
nevertheless
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, English is the third
language
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, shows as a total of 942 million
speakers
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,
hence
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, is very close to
Mandarin
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Chinese
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language
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,
furthermore
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, Arabic and Portuguese they have a similar
number
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 of
Speakers
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, speakers, language, mandarin, chinese, hindi, spanish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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