These days, mobile phone and the internet are very important to the ways in which people relate to one another socially. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern world,

cell

phones

and the

internet

are very important in our society

such

as in communication with

others

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people. Opinion, I always believe that it is very important to have a cellphone and the

internet

.

This

essay will explain how important

cell

phones

and the

internet

that

everyone

should have them. First of all,

everyone

uses a smartphone every

day

and it is very important to have a smartphone for work for contact with other people.

Secondly

, the

Internet

is very beneficial for us as

everyone

uses the

Internet

for everything like online banking and contact with each other.

In addition

,

cell

phones

and the

Internet

are very make our life easier ,

for example

, I use them to talk with my family and friends every

day

so, I think it is very important should

everyone

need

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to have a

cell

phone and

Internet

.

On the other hand

, many people believe that it is very dangerous

for uses

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a

cell

phone and the

Internet

likes

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a teenager who uses the

Internet

every

day

, will have problems with their health and someone will spend a long time on the

Internet

and the

Internet

has many things they can search that some information is good but some information is bad.

To sum up

, I totally agree that mobile

phones

and the

internet

are very positive things because it now a

day

everyone

uses the

internet

for everything and

cell

phones

are

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made our life better than before.

Moreover

, if we use the

internet

in bad ways and it is can not control

of

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it

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, the

internet

will harmful to us.

Therefore

, we need to control them and the government should protect us.