Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they shiuld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Today it is believed that
students
ought to be taught their enjoyable and preferable
subjects
in all universities or colleges.
However
, some people consider that
teacher
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should only teach essential
subjects
that will be helpful in the
future
, namely depending on
science
and
technology
. In my opinion, there are several advantages and disadvantages
of
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these views and I will give some personal
opinion
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opinions
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with reasons and examples in my essay.
Although
some people think that
all
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educational places
students
should learn whatever they do not want ,
such
as
science
or
technology
, I consider that every
student
's interests are considered
to
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the
subjects
by the educational system. If
student
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a student
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want
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wants
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to learn one
subject
, he or she will try to learn the essential degree of
this
subject
and
also
student
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the student
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can all difficulties of
subject
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the subject
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in the studying time.
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result
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this
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these
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types of
students
achieve a lot of rewards in the
future
life.
Moreover
, I recommend that having
interest
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in
subjects
not only
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child's
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new abilities or horizons to the world
,
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but
also
open
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new ideas for their
subject
. That's
mean
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that they do enjoy their studying.
On the other hand
, now there are several important
subjects
,
for
instance
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technology
and
science
which are connected with life.
Therefore
, some suggested that
technology
and
science
should be allowed to study every
student
in all universities. In my opinion, it is
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view
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to
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educational
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system. Because many youngsters have not
encouraging
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or
interests
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interested
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to
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in
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their university in order to compulsory
subjects
. If they do not prefer learning
to
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science
or
technology
, they maybe go to
the
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university by the way.
As a
result
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they cannot a good job or necessary career in the
future
. In conclusion, some suggested that
the
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students
of all educational places should study whatever they
do
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want. Others think that
students
ought to be learned
subjects
that
necessary
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are necessary
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in
the
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their
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future
life which
related
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are related
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to
science
or
technology
.
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