The table below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The given tables show how much money
taken
from Add a missing verb
was taken
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee
and bananas
in UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. The units are measured in millions of euros for 5-year
period from 1999.
Add an article
a 5-year
the 5-year
Overall
, it is clear that
the sales
of coffee
in all 4 Europian
countries increased steadily. Correct your spelling
European
However
, coffee's
Change noun form
coffee
sales
in UK
raised Correct article usage
the UK
drammatically
over the period shown. Correct your spelling
dramatically
Furthermore
, bananas'
Change noun form
bananas
sales
for
Change preposition
in
Switzerland
, UK
and Belgium saw an increase. When it comes to Sweden and Denmark, Correct article usage
the UK
this
indication decreased sharply.
Between 1999 and 2004, the sales
of Fairtrade-labelled coffee
for Switzerland
doubled from 3 million
to 6 million
euros. This
figure for Denmark also
grew starting
from 1.8 to 2 Change the verb form
to start
million
euros. Coffee
sales
in the UK
saw a drammatic
increase from 1.5 Correct your spelling
dramatic
till
20 Change preposition
to
million
with
taking the first position in Change preposition
apply
this
group.
There was a sharp grow
in Replace the word
growth
sales
of bananas
in Switzerland
from 15 million
to 47 millions
from 1999 until the Change to singular
million
last
year. People in Switzerland
spent on
Correct article usage
the on
bananas
most in the group in both years.Submitted by moxinurabjalilova on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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