The table below give information about sales of fairtrade labelled coffee bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The given tables show how much money
taken
from Add a missing verb
was taken
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled Use synonyms
coffee
and Use synonyms
bananas
in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
, Correct article usage
the UK
Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden. The units are measured in millions of euros for Use synonyms
5-year
period from 1999.
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a 5-year
the 5-year
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the Linking Words
sales
of Use synonyms
coffee
in all 4 Use synonyms
Europian
countries increased steadily. Correct your spelling
European
However
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
coffee's
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coffee
sales
in Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
raised Correct article usage
the UK
drammatically
over the period shown. Correct your spelling
dramatically
Furthermore
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bananas'
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bananas
sales
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for
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in
Switzerland
, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
UK
and Belgium saw an increase. When it comes to Sweden and Denmark, Correct article usage
the UK
this
indication decreased sharply.
Between 1999 and 2004, the Linking Words
sales
of Fairtrade-labelled Use synonyms
coffee
for Use synonyms
Switzerland
doubled from 3 Use synonyms
million
to 6 Use synonyms
million
euros. Use synonyms
This
figure for Denmark Linking Words
also
grew Linking Words
starting
from 1.8 to 2 Change the verb form
to start
million
euros. Use synonyms
Coffee
Use synonyms
sales
in the Use synonyms
UK
saw a Use synonyms
drammatic
increase from 1.5 Correct your spelling
dramatic
till
20 Change preposition
to
million
Use synonyms
with
taking the first position in Change preposition
apply
this
group.
There was a sharp Linking Words
grow
in Replace the word
growth
sales
of Use synonyms
bananas
in Use synonyms
Switzerland
from 15 Use synonyms
million
to 47 Use synonyms
millions
from 1999 until the Change to singular
million
last
year. People in Linking Words
Switzerland
spent Use synonyms
on
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the on
bananas
most in the group in both years.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, uk, switzerland, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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