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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

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Some people often find it difficult to balance their private lives with their
work
 and
this
 would definitely affect their mental health as an individual,we will discuss the reasons for
this
 and the possible solutions as well
Firstly
 some companies take a job that requires 2 or more people to accomplish it successfully and give it to an individual to accomplish thereby making the workload too tedious for the person. It
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therefore
 takes someone a long
time
 to achieve
such
 a task.
Also
 in the part of the world where I live, there are no proper road networks and there is a lack of good
roads
 thereby causing too much traffic in the mornings. Most of us leave our houses as early as 4am in other to be at
work
 at the stipulated
time
. I believe the solution to the first problem would be for an awareness to be made to most companies that the mental and physical health of their
staff
 matters and
also
 for a company to be growing very well,their
staff
 need to be productive. So for their
staff
 to be productive they should learn how to employ more hands and share the duties respectively. ,
Secondly
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 if the
work
 can be done online,they can
also
 give their
staff
 more
while
 to
work
 from home.
Furthermore
, policies should be put in place to allow
staff
 to take some
time
 off as leave to enable them to rest and bond with their families. The second problem can be solved if the government will allocate the building of
roads
 to credible Engineers so that solid
roads
 that can stand the test of
time
 be erected
also
 where there is traffic,they make an alternative road example flyover to aid in decongesting the
roads
. In conclusion,when people are able to strike a balance between their personal and
work
 lives,there will be tremendous growth both in their conduct and in the general welfare of the company they are working for.
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