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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately.

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Nowadays , a group of
students
 with bad behaviour in
school
 is one of the major problems for teachers. They would possibly
contributeto
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contribute to
a bad image of the
school
 and influence others.
This
 essay will argue why these
students
 are necessary to undergo counselling and the
school
's disciplinary action.
Students
 don't have the same attitude and there are factors that lead them to change their behaviours. Some of their personality got from the families where they grew up and some are just influenced by the
people
 around them.
For instance
, a student who has been experienced a broken family had a big effect on his/her attitude,
this
 student would possibly disrespectful to
people
 and felt insecure. These instances could influence other
students
 who have
also
 experienced family problems. Through the help of counselling and disciplinary action, the number of disruptive
school
students
 has gradually decreased. Part of the deped policies to every
school
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applied by the
school
 head and teachers to prevent unwanted happenings.
Overall
,
students
 must be fairly taught and informed of what are the right behaviours that they must show to the
people
 around them by implementing seminars and conferences.
This
 essay argued that separating
students
 from others could not help a lot because
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students
 have their own way to express their personality and behaviour and not all the
students
 who are noisy and disobedient are disruptive,it might be because of anger or feelings, they just need some advice to the
people
. In my opinion,
students
 should not be separated when taught to make them realize that teachers and
school
 faculty are concerned about them despite their behaviours.
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