In some countries, shopping online is replacing shopping at store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that in several parts of the world, traditional shopping

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are losing their position

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e-commerce. From my perspective, I firmly believe

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is an inevitable trend

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the following paragraphs will explain my reasons. On the one hand, there are several reasons why a significant number of

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still opt for shopping at

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.

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, products and services enable them to have real experiences, because buyers can see and touch the products which they intend to purchase. Meanwhile, online shopping

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provide photos and feedback from previous

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, which sometimes can be untrustworthy.

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, a significant number of online

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received clothes of poor quality and the wrong size, which they would never spend money on when they had choices at

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.

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, because of the convenience,

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tend to over-purchase and create waste. Not only the packages which

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be recycled, unused items can be thrown away and have detrimental effects on the environment.

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, I have a strong belief that the benefits of online shopping

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the drawbacks.

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, the internet encourages

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to buy a number of items from different

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without travelling to distant places.

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, there are various convenient shipping services which allow them to purchase big and heavy products with promotions.

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the reason why fewer and fewer buyers go to

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and buy bulky goods.

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, since the retailers can save store rental costs when selling online, their prices can be much more competitive compared to

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in traditional

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.

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used to new shopping methods, the land funds can be converted to other uses.

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,

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of leasing buildings for garment

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, the authorities can build hospitals on the main streets to

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the emergency cases. In short, because of the firm experiences at

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and unexpected waste from shopping online, there are still reasons for

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who

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traditional shopping methods.

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, thanks to the conveniences for the purchasers and benefits for the whole society,

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e-commerce

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gaining

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dominance. From my viewpoint,

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is a positive change for not only

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and salesmen but

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for the whole society.