Question: The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. the table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
police
budget
and expenses of an area of Britain is
depicted on the table and charts Change the verb form
are
accordingly
for 2017 and 2018.
As illustrated in the table police
total Change noun form
police's
budget
is increased to 318.6m form
304.7m Correct your spelling
from
of
2017. Among sources of Change preposition
in
police
Add an article
the police
budget
, the highest increase is on
local taxes from 91.2m to 102.3m. Whilst, National Change preposition
in
Governments
numbers Change noun form
Governments'
as
Change preposition
for
biggest
Correct article usage
the biggest
budget
are
175.5m and 177.8m Correct subject-verb agreement
is
accordingly
, other resources fund the police
by 38m and 38.5m as well.
In salary payments, while
the salary is the biggest portion of money spend
in Wrong verb form
spent
police
department for both years, the charts depict a considerably smaller percentage in 2018 by 69% when it is compared to 75% Add an article
the police
of
2017. Technology, Change preposition
in
on the other
hand
shows an increase from 8% to 14%. Building and transport Add the comma(s)
,hand
remains
the same Change the verb form
remain
17
% for both years.
Change preposition
at 17
In
Change preposition
Overall
overall
, it seems police
department is more focused on technology improvements in Correct article usage
the police
expense
of salaries and decided not to make any big Add an article
the expense
change
Fix the agreement mistake
changes
on
building and transport budgets.Change preposition
to
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