The Graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012.

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report derives from a bar chart which illustrates the total

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of how many

boys

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and

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who perform in six different categories in

sport

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in 2012.

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, the

boys

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prefer football over any other

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and dislike performing in hockey more than any other

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. Not only is

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point clear, but

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girls

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spend

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most of their time

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swimming

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hockey is a

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they perform the least amount of their time. Notably, the

number

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of

boys

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who play tennis is equal to the

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of

girls

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who perform in swimming which

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number

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is 50. The less

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for both sexes is in hockey.

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is around 10 for

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and over 10 for

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.

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, observe the highest rate in the chart belongs to

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which

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60 and

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demonstrator is 3 times more than

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.

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point

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the

girls

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show activity more than

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in badminton. The

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of

girls

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who play badminton is 40 and the

boys

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are 30. On a final note of comparison,

approximently

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approximately

40

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and only 20

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spend their time

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cycling.