Many professionals and doctors are leaving their poor countries to work in developed nations. What problems does it cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?

It is
ture
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true
that most professionals and doctors tend to stay in the developed
country
rather than the underdeveloped
country
.
While
there are various types
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will
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face the
country
and the
people
, these can be solved by taking some steps. If an educated person
leave
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their own
country
because of poor infrastructure, the
country
will face several problems. One possible problem is that the
country
will have a lack of intellectual
people
because most graduated
people
will go
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abroad for job
facilities
and higher wages which do not provide their native state. Another possible problem is that the
country
can not
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their economy
due to
professional
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professionals
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want
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to move themselves another world.
Furthermore
, an educated person is the backbone of a nation and he/she is the
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character to develop
country's
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financial background.
For example
, doctors, engineers, teachers and other workers will show the path of the
country
's progression because they will able to corporate the international companies and dealers for
country's
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wellbeing
as well as
will teach the next generation how to protect our
country
's resources and how to use its. Government can take some steps to tackle the problems. First of all, the nation should provide all types of
facilities
to the professional
people
such
as should
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job
facilities
and should give them basic needs ( medicine, house, clothes and so on).
Besides
, the authorities should increase the salary of
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doctors or engineers and other
secotor
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sector
sectors
workers.
As a consequence
, they will never imagine
to move
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another
country
. What is more, the administration should build
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schools, colleges, hospitals and other
work places
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.
As a result
, most
people
do not have to go to the outsider searching for these
facilities
and
people
from other countries will come to that
country
.
For instance
, India is famous for good treatment which is why every year foreigner comes
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India for their treatment which
help
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to increase
Indiai's
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India's
prosperity. In conclusion, many educated persons will move unless developing
the
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schools , hospitals and industries, increasing
the
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professional payment and so on.
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