Many professionals and doctors are leaving their poor countries to work in developed nations. What problems does it cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?
It is
ture
that most professionals and doctors tend to stay in the developed Correct your spelling
true
country
rather than the underdeveloped country
. While
there are various types problems
Change preposition
of problems
will
face the Correct pronoun usage
that will
country
and the people
, these can be solved by taking some steps.
If an educated person leave
their own Change the verb form
leaves
country
because of poor infrastructure, the country
will face several problems. One possible problem is that the country
will have a lack of intellectual people
because most graduated people
will go to
abroad for job Remove the preposition
apply
facilities
and higher wages which do not provide their native state. Another possible problem is that the country
can not be boost
their economy Change the verb form
boost
due to
professional
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professionals
want
to move themselves another world. Replace the word
wanting
Furthermore
, an educated person is the backbone of a nation and he/she is the maim
character to develop Correct your spelling
main
country's
financial background. Correct article usage
the country's
For example
, doctors, engineers, teachers and other workers will show the path of the country
's progression because they will able to corporate the international companies and dealers for country's
wellbeing Correct article usage
the country's
as well as
will teach the next generation how to protect our country
's resources and how to use its.
Government can take some steps to tackle the problems. First of all, the nation should provide all types of facilities
to the professional people
such
as should boarded
job Change the verb form
board
facilities
and should give them basic needs ( medicine, house, clothes and so on). Besides
, the authorities should increase the salary of the
doctors or engineers and other Correct article usage
apply
secotor
workers. Correct your spelling
sector
sectors
As a consequence
, they will never imagine to move
another Change the verb form
moving
country
. What is more, the administration should build the
schools, colleges, hospitals and other Correct article usage
apply
work places
. Correct your spelling
workplaces
As a result
, most people
do not have to go to the outsider searching for these facilities
and people
from other countries will come to that country
. For instance
, India is famous for good treatment which is why every year foreigner comes in
India for their treatment which Change preposition
to
help
to increase Change the verb form
helps
Indiai's
prosperity.
In conclusion, many educated persons will move unless developing Correct your spelling
India's
the
schools , hospitals and industries, increasing Correct article usage
apply
the
professional payment and so on.Correct article usage
apply
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