Many professionals and doctors are leaving their poor countries to work in developed nations. What problems does it cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?

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ture

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true

that most professionals and doctors tend to stay in the developed

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rather than the underdeveloped

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there are various types

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will

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face the

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and the

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, these can be solved by taking some steps. If an educated person

leave

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their own

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because of poor infrastructure, the

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will face several problems. One possible problem is that the

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will have a lack of intellectual

people

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because most graduated

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will go

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abroad for job

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and higher wages which do not provide their native state. Another possible problem is that the

country

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can not

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their economy

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professional

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professionals

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want

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to move themselves another world.

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, an educated person is the backbone of a nation and he/she is the

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character to develop

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country's

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the country's

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financial background.

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, doctors, engineers, teachers and other workers will show the path of the

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's progression because they will able to corporate the international companies and dealers for

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country's

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wellbeing

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will teach the next generation how to protect our

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's resources and how to use its. Government can take some steps to tackle the problems. First of all, the nation should provide all types of

facilities

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to the professional

people

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such

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as should

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job

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and should give them basic needs ( medicine, house, clothes and so on).

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, the authorities should increase the salary of

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doctors or engineers and other

secotor

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sector

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workers.

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, they will never imagine

to move

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another

country

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. What is more, the administration should build

the

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schools, colleges, hospitals and other

work places

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workplaces

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, most

people

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do not have to go to the outsider searching for these

facilities

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and

people

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from other countries will come to that

country

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, India is famous for good treatment which is why every year foreigner comes

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India for their treatment which

help

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to increase

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India's

prosperity. In conclusion, many educated persons will move unless developing

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schools , hospitals and industries, increasing

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apply

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professional payment and so on.

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