The diagrams below show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following diagrams illustrate a structure
that is
used to generate electricity
from wave power.
Overall
, it has two forms of generating electricity
from the sea which I will explain in this
article.
To begin
with, collected water in the chamber which
goes left by left wave power. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, it has air in the column which goes up by the clock-rounded turbine and it will be made electricity
.
On the other hand
, collected water in the chamber which
goes right by right wave power. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In addition
, it has air in the column which goes down by the clock-rounded turbine which is the same direction as before and it will be made electricity
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "goes up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 3 times.
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