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Many believe that the goal of one’s career should be to pursue a passion while others feel it is merely a way to earn a livelihood

#one’s #career #passion #livelihood
When a
person
 is going to choose his
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career
, is are of the most important
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 in his life, so it should be well
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.
This
desition
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 is
also
 important because it will define the rest of your
liffe
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life
. Taking into consideration that the
person
 thought the
desition
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 in a good way, there should be
a important things
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an important thing
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.
first,
the
person
´s passions and his way to earn a livelihood. Starting from
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 passion,
this
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 needs to have your passions
becaus
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because
 it is something that he will do every day of his life, so it has to be something that the
person
enjoy
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.
Also
, the
person
need
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 to be good at it, because if he is not good, might have many problems looking for a job and even have problems at the university with some tasks or
classess
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classes
.  Talking about livelihood your
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 needs to be based on your future lie
also
 because
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at
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 the end, it is
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crucial
 to
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have
a
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wealth
being
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in the present and in the future, and if you want to have it you need to think about many
thing
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 like the earnings, your, lifestyle, the lifestyle that you want in the future, but in a short, middle and long term. I firmly
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bike
 that the
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digestion
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decision
of
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chosing
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choosing
 a I firmly believe that the
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 of choosing a career need to have a balance between your passion
ander
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and
 your livelihood goals, and it will depend on each
person
. So,
to conclude
, you need to meditate
this
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desition
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 taking into consideration all of the things that I mentioned before. But
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 you a not happy with your
desition
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 you can change your career.
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