The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011

The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011
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The pie charts compare the proportion of the domestic budget for the important product in China in the years 1995 and 2011.
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, it is evident that food and clothing consume the largest size of
household
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expenses
while
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goods
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and
medicine
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were the least significant categories
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whereas
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the expenses on food and clothing decreased,
medicine
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and
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goods
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spending rose.
To begin
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, food was by far the most essential item for the residents of China. In 1995 it accounted for more than half (68%) of the entire expenses,it dropped to 59% in 2011 but still remains the most important group. The second item that received more recognition was clothing attracting 19% of the
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's money in 1995 which declined by 1% in 2011.
In contrast
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medicine
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and
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goods
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were the least vital on the items list in Chinese. In 1995 they spent just 4% of their domestic resources on
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which was by far the lowest fund spent and 9% on
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goods
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. By 2011 both sectors grew in importance and recorded a rate slightly higher than a tenth each.
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