You rent a four-bedroom house, which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter - Explain your situation - Describe the problems with the house - Say what you would like to happen
Dear Sir,
I am John living at flat 1,539, Forest Road, Canterbury 2036. I am writing to you with regards to the myriads of menaces facing in
this
flat which are taken on lease from you last
month.
First of all, this
flat has four bedrooms but now we are only three students living there and due to
that we have to pay 750 pounds monthly which is out of my budget. Now I am trying to find out one more student-only girl so that will land one spare room for her and the rent is divided into four. I also
request you if you find a suitable student please let me know.
Moreover
, we all have faced two major problems here. The primary one there is some problem with the cooling system because we all have experienced the temperature rise continuously during the daytime, despite being set up at 20° due to
the humidity increasing in the flat. Secondly
, the drainage system of the kitchen does not work properly sometimes water has blocked the sink.
Finally
, my request to you please take the necessary steps on these problems on an immediate basis. If possible contact the plumber so that the drainage problem fixing soon because due to
the kitchen issue
we have to order food from the market. If you require any Add a comma
,issue
further
information contact me on my email [email protected].
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
JohnSubmitted by parvinderp93 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite