A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Kate, I'm really excited to hear that you are thinking about going on a camping
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summer. I am happy to give you some advice on it.
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is best for you as it contains a photography event.
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, the theme of
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is
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nature. Being a photographer you will definitely enjoy
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holiday
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very well.
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, you will meet so many photographers which will come from different countries, and you will learn new ideas and techniques from them.
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, I would like to mention some obvious drawbacks of
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. As there is a monsoon season available
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that time, you should bring some rainy clothes with you.
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need to take care of your camera.
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, I really want to join
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with you, but I cannot join because I have to go
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presentation out of
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at that time. I
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, but I am happy because you are going to enjoy your first camping. Hope to hear from you soon. Warmest regards,
Milav
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Milan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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