The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various cayegories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage changes in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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The graph and table below compare the

amount

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of export

goods

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from one nation with 5 types of

products

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and

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divided into; petroleum

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, Engineering

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, Gems and Jewellery, agricultural

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, and textiles. In 2015 and 2016.

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, it is can be observed that export earnings in both years experienced

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similar trend from the highest earning and slightly dropped in all categories.

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, The proportion of those

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in the country,

textile

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the textile

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industry

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was the largest growth in change values compared with others. To start with,

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Nation export's earnings from 2015 to 2016, at 60

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dollars

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was petroleum and followed by engineered

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at 50

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dollars

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in 2015 and

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2016 maintain the same percentage at 60

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dollars

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, and textiles represented the lowest earning solely 30

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dollars

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, respectively. With regard to, the percentage change in values from both years, textiles showed the highest percentage at 15.24 per

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and followed by engineered

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at 8.5 per

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petroleum

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and petroleum

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products

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at 3 per

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, respectively.

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, solely gems and jewellery experienced undergo to 5.18 per

cent

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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, products, billion, dollars, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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