The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table provides information on the percentage of students participating in four types of high
schools
from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, there was an increased percentage of adolescents enrolled in community schools
throughout the reporting period, whereas
the ratio of high school students admitted to specialist schools
, grammar schools
, and voluntary-aided schools
declined over time.
With regards to the schools
with the highest enrolment rate over a nine-year period, community schools
top the list and showed a threefold increase, starting the period at 12% in 2000 and finishing at 58% in 2009.
In contrast
, among the three remaining schools
that witnessed a downward trajectory, voluntary-controlled schools
faced the most significant threefold reduction (20%) of student enrollment in 2009, compared to 52% in 2000. Interestingly, the percentage of enrolment in specialist schools
declined by 1% every four years. In addition
, the attendance rate in grammar schools
fell doubled from 24% in 2000 to 12% in 2009.Submitted by joewingpun1992 on
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