The chart below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figures.

The chart below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figures.
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The table illustrates information about secondary school
teachers
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’ salaries in five different
countries
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in 2009.
Overall
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,
teachers
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in Luxembourg starting their job were paid the highest
salary
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compared with the remaining nations,
whereas
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the lowest earning was recorded by
teachers
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in
Australia
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. Another noticeable point is that
Australia
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and
Denmark
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were the two
countries
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that had to wait for the lowest number of
years
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to reach the maximum
salary
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. Looking first at the beginning and after 15
years
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of
salary
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, the
salary
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of
teachers
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in Luxembourg occupied the first position, with the former being $80.000 and the latter being $119.000. Followed by
Denmark
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with $45.000 per year for junior
teachers
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,
then
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15
years
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of experience were paid $45.000.
Additionally
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, the
salary
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of
teachers
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in Japan, Korea, and
Australia
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who started their job with no experience was much lower than the figures for all
countries
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, just $34.000, $30.000, and $28.000, respectively.
While
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figures for Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea
also
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witnessed an upward promotion of the maximum
salary
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that
teachers
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after a long-term teaching period can be received, the opposite was true for
Denmark
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and
Australia
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.
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but not least, it only took
teachers
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in
Australia
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and
Denmark
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less than 10
years
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to receive their maximum
salary
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,
while
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teachers
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in the other
countries
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had to wait for at least 30
years
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, teachers, salary, australia, denmark, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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