The chart below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figures.

The chart below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figures.
The table illustrates information about secondary school
teachers
’ salaries in five different
countries
in 2009.
Overall
,
teachers
in Luxembourg starting their job were paid the highest
salary
compared with the remaining nations,
whereas
the lowest earning was recorded by
teachers
in
Australia
. Another noticeable point is that
Australia
and
Denmark
were the two
countries
that had to wait for the lowest number of
years
to reach the maximum
salary
. Looking first at the beginning and after 15
years
of
salary
, the
salary
of
teachers
in Luxembourg occupied the first position, with the former being $80.000 and the latter being $119.000. Followed by
Denmark
with $45.000 per year for junior
teachers
,
then
15
years
of experience were paid $45.000.
Additionally
, the
salary
of
teachers
in Japan, Korea, and
Australia
who started their job with no experience was much lower than the figures for all
countries
, just $34.000, $30.000, and $28.000, respectively.
While
figures for Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea
also
witnessed an upward promotion of the maximum
salary
that
teachers
after a long-term teaching period can be received, the opposite was true for
Denmark
and
Australia
.
Last
but not least, it only took
teachers
in
Australia
and
Denmark
less than 10
years
to receive their maximum
salary
,
while
teachers
in the other
countries
had to wait for at least 30
years
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