The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of the
household
budget
for necessities in China during the year 1995-2011.
Overall
, most percentages of the budget
are spent on food, while
less amount was spent on medicine and household
goods in both years.
In 1995, 68% of the household
budget
was spent on food, which was higher than the others however
, only 4% budget
was spent on medicine. 19% of the household
budget
was spent on clothing. The budget
spending on household
goods is 10% less than on clothes.
Furthermore
, In 2011, 11% and 1% decreases occurred in the budget
, which was spent on food and clothing respectively. Although
, 7% and 3% increase experienced in medicine and household
goods.Submitted by lakshmimahendran915 on
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