The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011

The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of the
household
budget
for necessities in China during the year 1995-2011.
Overall
, most percentages of the
budget
are spent on food,
while
less amount was spent on medicine and
household
goods in both years. In 1995, 68% of the
household
budget
was spent on food, which was higher than the others
however
, only 4%
budget
was spent on medicine. 19% of the
household
budget
was spent on clothing. The
budget
spending on
household
goods is 10% less than on clothes.
Furthermore
, In 2011, 11% and 1% decreases occurred in the
budget
, which was spent on food and clothing respectively.
Although
, 7% and 3% increase experienced in medicine and
household
goods.
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