Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. Others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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problems are increasingly being paid attention to by individuals.

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, it is believed that the general

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standard of

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is likely to decrease in the years to come. From

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perspective, I partly disagree with

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opinion because of the following reasons. Perhaps for many,

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standpoint is convincing because of several reasons.

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the polluted environment will cause negative impacts on the well-being of most

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in the world, particularly in polluted areas. To elaborate, an increasing amount of vehicles is one of the key reasons for air pollution that causes lung disease

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. Particularly, in developing countries

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as Vietnam,

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the industrial process, there will be more factories which emit a large

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of emissions and affect negatively their well-being.

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individuals tend to spend more time

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working

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of taking care of their physical and mental

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because of the financial burden. To be specific, five to nine jobs likely dominate the majority of the time of employees, which leads to sedentary lifestyles in them since they lack time to

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exercise. In fact, now most current generations are facing economic burdens to own houses,

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individuals their whole life to achieve. Despite the above valid arguments, I still contend that

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is a wrong perspective. The most pertinent point is that the development of the medical system and technology enables

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to apply them in enhancing their

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. Especially, thanks to advanced tools, doctors have researched more modern methods

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finding out effective cues to help patients.

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, American residents apply many technology tools to manage their

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as Healthy apps

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smartphones. Another justification is that the quality of life increasingly grows, which leads to the improvement of the well-being of people in the future.

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, Vietnamese

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tend to pursue a healthy diet by consuming more vegetables

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of fried foods

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going to the hospital to check their

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annually. In short, the basic

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standard of people may be lower in the long run than the present because of the polluted environment and financial pressure.

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, these problems are handled completely thanks to the growth of society.